“It has to be very relevant to your protagonists experiences. If it’s nice to have, but doesn’t actually move the story on, you just have to cut it, you don’t need it. The dreaded info dump slows the pace of a story so much and bores the reader to tears, or even worse, closing the book and falling asleep. You can be sure they won’t pick it up when they wake. Info dumps show you know a lot of stuff, but it doesn’t make for a good story. Decide what you absolutely need to set the scene, give your hero their incentive to act, and drip feed it throughout the story as you need it, not all at once.”
– Author Ali Isaac
I love this advice. My favorite part is: “..drip feed it throughout the story as you need it…”
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i like that quote “dripfeed” its a great way of remembering
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Indeed. And thank you for always leaving a comment on the table, I love it 🙂
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thank you
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I love reading fiction replete with infor dummps, and none of your diatribes will remove that preference. Consequently, I will shamelessly continue massive information dumping.
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Lol. Thanks for leaving a comment on the table.
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This is serious, and nowhere near funny.
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